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Of course i am talking about "GOD" (I don't know why he didn't just wrote "God" like a normal person but he needed to make him a GODLY name so he choose all large captions "GOD")

First Things First: '''The Image used.... '''

If you don't have any goddman picture of the character...

Just make a profile without a picture in it, it's nothing new it has happen in many profiles before but stealing art from a franchise that isn't even yours (In this case being shadowverse) and putting in your OC is just... Insulting to this wiki and the franchise you stole it from.

The Second Problem: The Character Synopsis and the Claim it actually comes from a book...

Now if you were a writer you would put a lot more effort into a book for a character background story to make it somewhat deep and interesting...

it isn't the case in here, in fact the character is so poorly written it's actually really funny

Here's an example:

"she overthrew every being in the omniverse and ruled over everything wickedly wanting people to address her as "king." 

>Her

>King



And not to mention the story literally contradicts itself

Here's the proof:

"with her immense power she overthrew every being in the omniverse and ruled over everything"

But then for some reason the author states this thing is the second strongest being which as i said contradicts the shit-written story...

and this isn't how you even write a character

in every story the god always made duality between evil and good (Micheal and Lucifer for example)

in this case the god is fucking retarded and let this thing destroy the existense and you know how god responeded...

He fucking destroyed the multiverse and her and recreate it and for some reason made her to be the guardian of the multiverse which is just... fucking retarded

If a being is designed by god to be evil then it's gonna remain evil

in this case the god is retarded and said "Hey i don't want evil in this existence so i'll destroy the thing i desgined to be evil"

You get the point

And i'm starting to think the writer is plain retarded. Lemme explain...

He first said in the profile of GOD that he made the story in a book

Link

Then it contradicts himself by saying he didn't wrote it in a book

Link

Do we really need to go on...

Alright here we go

Problem Number Three: A Mary Sue Character (I have cancer)

If you don't know what a mary sue character is:

"A Mary Sue is an idealized and seemingly perfect fictional character. Often, this character is recognized as an author insert or wish fulfillment."

You realize where's the problem now right?

This character doesn't deserve to be in this wiki

Please remove it 

Sincerely,                                                                                                                                          Lorax  